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Title: particularly proud of this one...
Post by: ~vxn~ on December 19, 2007, 01:41:00 PM
rarely do i ever love a piece the way i love this one...

~untitled~

Shards of sleep slice deep my peace,
these blankets, my shroud—entomb.
Counting miles of ceiling tiles;
my cell, this place, my room.

Fragments of thought abandon me not,
those images my sanity betray.
Glowing designs lay upon the blinds,
wayward streetlights peer in this way.

Splinters of mind lost not to time—
instead to love most deep.
I cry the years those countless tears
through insomnia riddled sleep.

Pieces of soul, heart covered in holes
my entirety pervaded by pain;
awaiting death with bated breath—
but I'd love you all over again.
(c) Melyssa G. Sprott 2007
Title: Re: particularly proud of this one...
Post by: cachegurl on December 20, 2007, 09:28:06 AM
Vixen, that is awesome! I've written some poetry but I can only hope to ever be HALF as good as you are.  :yes:
Title: Re: particularly proud of this one...
Post by: tallulahdahling on December 21, 2007, 03:31:11 PM
WOW!

Very decent of you to allow us to view your soul, Vxn
Title: Re: particularly proud of this one...
Post by: ~vxn~ on December 27, 2007, 08:53:18 PM
thank you so much, cache... that is quite a compliment.  wow.  ty.   

very decent of you to read, tallulah.  ty.  that inner darkness can turn to madness if not let out once in a while.  lol.